Gail Anderson-Dargatz  

Resources for Writers

On the Building Blocks of Fiction

In the early years, I, like many apprentice writers, felt that I had to write a novel in the same way I read it: starting with chapter one and working chapter by chapter through the project. Generally, I got to chapter three before the project failed, because, of course, writing doesn’t work like this. The process of writing is much more like putting together an elaborate jigsaw puzzle where all the building blocks of fiction are moved around repeatedly as the project builds. For example, the ending in my literary novel Turtle Valley was once in the middle of the book.
 
So, you can’t come into a project thinking you’ll know what you’ll end up with. Your project will, and should, continue to surprise you as you write and rewrite it. Writing is an act of discovery.
 
In the discovery draft, I write in terms of "scene" rather than "chapter" because I know the scenes will shuffle around like cards in a deck and I won't know where they will fall. In fact, as I'm writing, I'll leave gaps in my writing with placeholder instructions in bold letters that say DESCRIPTION or TRANSITION. After I've decided on my situation and characters, I focus on the nuts and bolts of scene: dialogue and action. I leave all else for later. That makes it easier to shift stuff around.
 
So, as you start to write your project, just sit down and write a basic scene (action and dialogue). Then write another, and another. The writer Gregory Dunne said, “Writing is like a manual labour of the mind; a job, like laying a pipe.” And I agree. You lay one pipe (or scene) after another. Eventually it all comes together. Those blocks of exposition, description and transition are the fittings that fit those pipes (scenes) together.
 
I will write bits of description and transition as well in the first draft. But I often keep these building blocks in a separate file. I'll retrieve them when I'm starting to fit the scenes together into chapters or a story and I have a better idea of where the scenes will fall, when things are starting to gel. But I know even then that I will continue to move things around well into the editing stage.

In other words, as writers, we must learn to be flexible, to let go.
 
It's useful to think of writing fiction as if it is a magic jigsaw puzzle that can be put together in an infinite number of ways. You are free, then, to rethink situation and throw everything up in the air and start again if you need to. I do just that many times in the course of writing a story or novel.

Resource Categories

Blogs on Craft

On the Building Blocks of Fiction

Tips on how to craft vivid scene that allows the reader to experience events right along with the characters.

On Finding Your Big Idea

Insights into the writing process and what a writer's day really looks like, as well as perspectives on research and writing from real life.

On Getting to Know Your Characters

Advice on the many ways you can make your characters come alive on the page for both you and your reader.

On Deciding on Point of View

What is the best perspective from which to tell your story? Writers discuss how they made choices on point of view and voice.

On Choosing Your Situation and Setting

Writers talk about how they use situation and setting to build story and convey emotion.

On Developing Conflict and Structure

From how to work in different genres to finding the real story, writers offer good advice on building conflict and structure.

On Revising

Tips on how to gain distance from your work and to how to re-imagine your next draft.

On Publishing

Writers offer practical advice on the business of writing and promotion, and on the importance of finding a writing community.

On Making a Living as a Writer

Writers offer words of wisdom on living on less.

On The Writer's Life

Writers talk about their life as a writer.

About Gail

Gail's novels have been national and international bestsellers and two have been short-listed for the Giller Prize, among other awards. She works with writers from around the world on her online teaching forums.