Gail Anderson-Dargatz  

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On the Building Blocks of Fiction

Exposition conveys information to the reader. It’s often used in the opening of a story to establish what the reader needs to know before the story begins, like character backstory, for example. It’s also used in transitions, allowing the author to jump over passages of time where it’s unnecessary to show scene.

Here's an example of exposition from the opening of my literary novel, The Spawning Grounds. You'll see I went so far as to slip in a little environmental lecture in this patch of exposition. I usually discourage the writers I work with from "lecturing," but I felt this information was necessary to the story:

SpawningGroundspbB"Hannah had arranged to miss the coming week of classes in her environmental studies program to save the fish, to carry them upriver alongside a handful of other volunteers from the reserve. Her instructors understood. Every living thing around them depended on the return of the salmon. The rotting fish would nourish the water this fall and again in early spring when the sun warmed what was left of the sockeye's frozen bodies. Their flesh would feed the tiny creatures that in turn fed the sockeye fry when they burst from their stone nests come spring. In this way, the sockeye fed their young with their own bodies and were resurrected within their children's flesh. If not enough sockeye returned during this run, if not enough died here, the river would starve, the sockeye fry would starve, the lake would starve, the eagles and bears and the land around them would starve."

Here, I’m telling the reader something; I’m passing on information. In the phrase, “show, don’t tell,” exposition is “tell.” Generally, it’s much easier to write exposition than it is to write scene. That’s one of the reasons apprentice writers tend to overuse exposition. Our early writing and the rough drafts of even experienced writers are often full of exposition, telling, explaining. And in our discovery draft, that’s okay. Exposition provides a sketch of what’s to come. In the revision process, you can unpack much of that exposition into scene.

Also, keep in mind that there are no rules to writing, only effects. The balance of exposition to scene in fiction is somewhat a matter of taste. In the past, a novelist could impose great long passages of exposition and description on their reader. But modern expectations have been so heavily influenced by film that it is the norm, now, to present the bulk of the novel or story in scenes, and that’s especially true for writing aimed at a younger audience. Readers just don’t have a lot of patience, anymore, for large chunks of description and exposition. Exposition stalls narrative drive, that tension that keeps the reader reading. It's like this: the reader is driving along in the scene when, thunk, a big chunk of exposition falls on the road right in front of them. The story comes to a screeching hault.

Still, exposition is a necessary and useful tool in the fiction writer's toolbox. It's just that a little goes a long way, and you need to be sneaky about tucking it into your story.

Want to know more? Check out this blog on Handling Your Exposition.

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On the Building Blocks of Fiction

Tips on how to craft vivid scene that allows the reader to experience events right along with the characters.

On Finding Your Big Idea

Insights into the writing process and what a writer's day really looks like, as well as perspectives on research and writing from real life.

On Getting to Know Your Characters

Advice on the many ways you can make your characters come alive on the page for both you and your reader.

On Deciding on Point of View

What is the best perspective from which to tell your story? Writers discuss how they made choices on point of view and voice.

On Choosing Your Situation and Setting

Writers talk about how they use situation and setting to build story and convey emotion.

On Developing Conflict and Structure

From how to work in different genres to finding the real story, writers offer good advice on building conflict and structure.

On Revising

Tips on how to gain distance from your work and to how to re-imagine your next draft.

On Publishing

Writers offer practical advice on the business of writing and promotion, and on the importance of finding a writing community.

On Making a Living as a Writer

Writers offer words of wisdom on living on less.

On The Writer's Life

Writers talk about their life as a writer.

About Gail

Gail's novels have been national and international bestsellers and two have been short-listed for the Giller Prize, among other awards. She works with writers from around the world on her online teaching forums.