Gail Anderson-Dargatz  

Resources for Writers

On Choosing Your Situation and Setting

thompson bridge 0Setting serves many functions within a narrative. Descriptions of the setting ground the reader and allow them to picture the characters interacting within a given environment. The setting can convey the emotion of the characters and set the tone or mood of the story. Even weather can be important. For example, gothic stories, like Stephenie Meyer's Twilight, use dreary, rainy locations to offer a sense of foreboding.

Setting description also functions as a transition between one time and location and another. When moving to a new scene, or starting a new chapter, we always need to orient the reader, to them know where and when they are now. The quickest way to do this is through a paragraph of landscape description.
 
Setting isn’t just the location your story takes place in; it’s also the time your story takes place within, the era. World building, or describing the world in which the characters live, is especially important in historical or science fiction stories, where the setting and era may be unfamiliar to the reader. Here, we really need to take the time to fully orient the reader about what the landscape looks like, how the character lives, what the culture is like.
 
World building is so important to historical and sci-fi stories, in fact, that they tend to be longer because of the extra space description of setting takes up. But even here a little goes a long way. A hundred years ago, a writer could get away with pages of setting description, especially at the start of a story or novel, before the story got underway. But that’s not the case anymore. We’re all so influenced by film that we just want that quick opening shot that lets us know where we are before we jump right into the story. So, be cautious of overloading your story with a pile of setting description. It can stall the story in the same way exposition does.
 
But remember that once you’ve established the setting, you want to offer the reader reminders of it, to keep the reader oriented. This can be as simple as having the character pick up a coffee cup in a kitchen as she talks. Objects and room decor are as much a part of setting as the landscape outside.
 
Want to know more? Here’s How to Craft Immersive Setting Descriptions.

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Blogs on Craft

On the Building Blocks of Fiction

Tips on how to craft vivid scene that allows the reader to experience events right along with the characters.

On Finding Your Big Idea

Insights into the writing process and what a writer's day really looks like, as well as perspectives on research and writing from real life.

On Getting to Know Your Characters

Advice on the many ways you can make your characters come alive on the page for both you and your reader.

On Deciding on Point of View

What is the best perspective from which to tell your story? Writers discuss how they made choices on point of view and voice.

On Choosing Your Situation and Setting

Writers talk about how they use situation and setting to build story and convey emotion.

On Developing Conflict and Structure

From how to work in different genres to finding the real story, writers offer good advice on building conflict and structure.

On Revising

Tips on how to gain distance from your work and to how to re-imagine your next draft.

On Publishing

Writers offer practical advice on the business of writing and promotion, and on the importance of finding a writing community.

On Making a Living as a Writer

Writers offer words of wisdom on living on less.

On The Writer's Life

Writers talk about their life as a writer.

About Gail

Gail's novels have been national and international bestsellers and two have been short-listed for the Giller Prize, among other awards. She works with writers from around the world on her online teaching forums.