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Until recently, I was known as literary writer, and I still am. But then I wrote two psychological or domestic thrillers, The Almost Widow and The Almost Wife, which hit the Canadian bestseller lists. What's that? Gail writes thrillers? I expect some readers who are familiar with my literary works will wonder what the heck I’m up to.
 
That was, in fact, the reaction I had from some readers when I started writing hi-lo or literacy learner books for adults and young adults working to improve literacy skills. I remember seeing a few confused reviews from readers. Why was the writing so different from my literary novels? The answer of course, was that I was writing for a different market, in that case the educational market, with very different expectations. Reader expectations for domestic thrillers are different too. 
 

The cons

And that’s one hurdle to crossing genres: reader expectations. When we do publish in a new genre, our readers in our pre-existing genre may, as they did with me, become confused about the switch. And switching genres can mean you have a much smaller new audience which can translate into a smaller publishing income, so it’s not a decision to make lightly. Building a readership takes time, and when we switch to a new readership, it can effectively mean we have to start all over again within the genre.
 
Writing in a new genre is difficult too. We really have to get a handle on the expectations of that particular genre before we sit down to write. That means a lot of reading, careful study, and experimentation. 
 
We also have to fight our existing set of skills from the previous genre. For example, a screenwriter turning to the novel usually has a great sense of structure, but their novel may lack “meat” or substance or depth. A poet turning to fiction will write lovely prose and know how to use the environment and context to elicit emotion in the reader, but may struggle under the overwhelming amount of research and detail involved in writing a novel, and they will very likely struggle to find structure as well. Journalists, skilled at researching and interviewing, may find that the early drafts of their novels feature too much in the way of journalistic-style exposition and interviews between characters on the page. Even moving from writing mysteries to thrillers requires a shift in mindset, approach and structure. It's tough to switch gears, and I see these issues crop up all the time with the writers I work with.
 
In short, we have to learn a whole new skill and that takes time. Experienced writers too often kick themselves for not catching on to a new genre quickly enough. I encourage the writers I work with to go easy on themselves and be patient with the learning process, to enjoy that ride. It can be both exhilarating and frustrating to learn the new craft. 

The pros

Still, I believe there are many reasons to take the plunge into another genre. We have a whole lot to learn from our brethren writing in other genres. We can rummage through their toolboxes for tools we can use in our own genre. For example, learning fiction craft will help the creative non-fiction writer with dialogue and structure, and the poet and screenwriter learn how to find that meat, that substance that gives the novel its heft and depth.
 
A novelist, in turn, can learn so much from the poet when it comes to language or eliciting emotion or talking about the abstract through description of the concrete. Novelists have been borrowing from the screenwriter’s toolbox for a very long time, using screen structure, that Save the Cat! structure, to map out our stories, to understand our protagonist’s conflicts and story goals.
 
For years, I’ve been sending the literary writers I work with to what we usually think of as commercial structures: the mystery, romance, gothic and horror, sci-fi and, of course, the thriller, which has always been one of my favorite genres. From our commercial brethren, the literary writer can come to fully understand structure and story goals, about narrative drive and what keeps a reader reading. The key, as always, though, is to never view these various structures as a template, a plan, or our stories will feel formulaic. Rather, we should use the study of these structures as a brainstorming tool that helps us find our own unique structure for our project.
 
Yet another bonus of writing in other genres is that it can open up whole other markets and surprising opportunities. For example, my YA hi-lo book Iggy’s World was just picked up by a publisher in Korea,  was a JLG Gold Standard Selection and short-listed for the Chocolate Lily Book Awards. My three hi-lo thrillers, the Claire Abbott series, are about to be published in Sweden. And my hi-lo middle school novella The Ride Home was short-listed for a BC and Yukon Book Prize. These were all delightful surprises that would never have had happened if I hadn’t risked stepping into this new educational market. The biggest reward for me was the new audience I met, many new readers who fell in love with reading through the books I and other hi-lo authors had penned.
 
And, of course, a writer can blend genres within one work, to create fresh takes on old structures. How about a sci-fi mystery? Or fantasy romance? Or environmental sci-fi thriller? Once it was difficult to find a home for a cross-genre project, but now cross-genre novels are really taking off and increasingly gaining audiences. 

Rekindling our passion for writing 

But maybe most importantly, looking into other genres breathes new life into our writing practice, our writing life. Writing in just one genre -- whether poetry, screenwriting, romance, thriller, mystery or literary --  can get boring after a while. We may find ourselves feeling like we’re doing the same old thing over and over. At some point in almost anyone’s career, we reach a point where we want to try something new. 
 
I hit that place a few years ago, when writing literary lost a bit of its gloss. Around that time, I was offered the opportunity to write thrillers for adults working to improve their literacy skills. I’ve taught and edited many other writers as they worked on their own thrillers over the last two decades, so I was already very familiar with the form. But I went deeper into the thriller form as I wrote these hi-lo books and found myself falling in love with the structure. I talked to my agent about jumping into writing a full-on commercial thriller thinking she would likely talk me out of it, but she didn’t. She encouraged me to wade right in, found me a terrific, supportive editor at HarperCollins and The Almost Wife and The Almost Widow is the result.
 
Diving into a new genre got me excited about my writing life again. As they say, variety is the spice of life. And I’m already incorporating what I’ve learned about writing thrillers into my upcoming literary projects, to boost the story, narrative drive.
 
But what will readers who are familiar with my past literary work think of my domestic thrillers? So far the reception has been great and I've received many positive reviews. And  maybe this new writing is not so different as all that. I’ve always written about the domestic, the darkness and drama (and thrills) found in our everyday lives. In The Almost Wife, you’ll still see the small town and rural settings, the family drama, and even the touch of magic realism that has characterized my past works. I’m exploring similar settings and subject matter because that’s what I’m interested in. Ultimately, in making a leap into a new genre we take our own interests and perspectives with us, and my guess is that we can also take at least some of our audience there as well, as we connect with a whole new readership.

Testimonials

Tara Gereaux

"Gail is an incredible editor. She has an innate ability to understand what I’m trying to do with my writing and to help me see what I need to do to get where I want. The best part about working with her is her supportive, encouraging approach. She’s a writer, she gets it – she knows how hard writing can be – but when I’m working with Gail, it always feels a little bit easier and a little more fun. Can’t recommend her highly enough."

-- Tara Gereaux has published two books of fiction and was the recipient of the Colleen Bailey Memorial Award from the Saskatchewan Foundation for the Arts, and a REVEAL Indigenous Art Award from the Hnatyshyn Foundation.

Tara Gereaux

Christine Fischer Guy

"Gail’s model suited me right down to the ground, exactly the right combination of close reading, thoughtful feedback, and enough space to work these questions through in my own time. She’s an intelligent and experienced manuscript midwife with an uncanny ability to see to the heart of what I was trying to do. I appreciate her guidance immensely!"

-- Christine Fischer Guy author of The Umbrella Mender (2014) and The Instrument Must Not Matter (2026).

Christine Fischer Guy

Leila Marshy

"I've been writing my whole life, but in the past two years I can say that Gail has pretty much taught me everything I now know. I am convinced that without Gail's ministrations, my novel The Philistine would not be enjoying its current success"

-- Leila Marshy, author of The Philistine and 2026 winner of TWUC's Danuta Gleed Literary Award for My Thievery of the People.

Leila Marshy

Matthew Hooton

"Gail's developmental edits were superb. Her attention to the manuscript's structure, to themes and emotional resonances, and to the character creation were at once challenging, sophisticated and encouraging. And she draws on a range of excellent resources. I've not seen anything quite like it in twenty-five years in the industry."

-- Dr. Matthew Hooton, author of Deloume Road, Typhoon Kingdom, and Everything Lost, Everything Found, longlisted for the ARA Historical Novel Prize 2025. Dr. Hooton is a lecturer at the University of Adelaide.

Matthew Hooton

Jessica Waite

"Gail is the total package: brilliant writer, keen-eyed editor, ace story architect, and warm genuine human. The structural foundation she taught saved me years of floundering in the dark. Thank you Gail!"

-- Jessica Waite, author of the Widow's Guide to Dead Bastards,  one of The Globe and Mail's best 100 books of 2024.

Jessica Waite

Darcy Friesen Hossack

"By the end of the first draft, I'd rediscovered colour in a world that had faded to black and white. I can not thank Gail enough."

-- Darcy Friesen Hossack, Danuta Gleed runner-up and Commonwealth Prize-shortlisted author of Mennonites Don't Dance  and Stillwater.

Darcy Friesen Hossack

Kelly S. Thompson

"Not only did Gail help me to polish my prose, but she also showed my how to believe in my own work, how to play, how to explore language with the writer's tools. What a gift, to have someone champion your work in a way that makes you, the writer, feel seen."

-- Kelly S. Thompson, national bestselling author of Girls Need Not Apply: Field Notes from the Forces.

Kelly S. Thompson

Lise Mayne

"Time Enough became the novel I longed to create thanks to Gail’s expert advice and encouragement. Gail helps writers find the heart of their own story, the mark of the very best teachers. I highly recommend her as a professional mentor and a sincere guide."

-- Lise Mayne, author of Time Enough.

Lise Mayne

Elle Wild

"Gails fiction course was the best class I have ever taken. Full stop. Her notes and analysis were invaluable and I still use the creative exercises she shared with us."

-- Elle Wild. #1 bestselling author of Strange Things Done and winner of the Arthur Ellis Award for Best Unpublished First Crime Novel.

Elle Wild

Maia Caron

"Perhaps there's no greater proof of a manuscript editor's work than when the writer they mentor gets a publishing contract, but what I found most valuable was applying Gail's insightful comments when I began to plot a new book."

-- Maia Caron, author of Song of Batoche

Maia Caron

Daniel Griffin

"Gail has been a great help to me for many years, reading my novels and stories and providing practical, clear and meaningful feedback. Her focus on the structure of a story, its arc, the conflict that drives it and the development of characters and their transformation has been invaluable."

-- Daniel Griffin is the author of Stopping for Strangers and Two Roads Home.

Daniel Griffin

Nerys Parry

"(Gail's) greatest gift is her passion. She truly loves the craft and throws her heart into her work as not only a teacher but also as a coach and inspiration to aspiring writers. She always knows just how far to push you without breaking you, and if you let her, she can help you become a far better writer than you ever imagined..."

-- Nerys Parry, author of Man & Other Natural Disasters, a finalist for the Colophon Prize and tied for seventh in the Giller Prize Reader’s Choice Awards.

Nerys Parry

Jennifer Manuel

"Gail has a firm grasp on what effective mentorship looks like: supportive, challenging, fully engaged. Immediately Gail got to the heart of my novel’s problem and then worked with me to find possible solutions, pushing my craft to a higher level and deepening my understanding of narrative structure. It was nothing short of a shattering breakthrough.”

-- Jennifer Manuel, author of The Heaviness of Things That Float

Jennifer Manuel

Liisa Kovala

"Working with Gail during an early stage of my historical fiction manuscript was like taking a masterclass. Both my novel and my skills as a writer improved through her guidance. Best of all, Gail is not only knowledgeable about everything to do with writing, she is also delightful to work with."

-- Liisa Kovala, author of Surviving Stutthof: My Father's Memories Behind the Death Gate and Sisu's Winter War.

Liisa Kovala

Emily De Angelis

"Gail was knowledgeable, thoughtful, and kind as she coached me through the process. Her feedback validated my journey and help me to move forward with my story in countless meaningful ways..."

-- Emily De Angelis, author of The Stones of Burren Bay.

Emily De Angelis

Maggi Feehan

"Gail is nothing short of an editing genius. She has the rare ability to give feedback laced with compassion, appreciation and respect... that will inspire you to go back to the page and transform your narrative, words and characters in truly remarkable ways."

-- Maggi Feehan, author of The Serpent's Veil

Maggi Feehan

Kimmy Beach

"I'm so happy I chose Gail as my first foray into the world of hiring an outside eye. I've loved her work for ages, and hoped her insight would take my new project where it needed to go. I'm overwhelmed with gratitude (and work!). Thank you, Gail. You 'get' me."

-- Kimmy Beach, author of The Last Temptation of Bond.

Kimmy Beach

Chris Tarry

"Working with Gail has become the measure by which I rate every workshop I've taken, or will ever take. And she has set the bar impossibly high. To study with Gail is to understand the plight of the Apprentice Writer, to take solace in her direction, and to witness one's growth in virtually real time."

-- Chris Tarry, four-time Juno Award winner and author of How to Carry a Bigfoot Home.

Chris Tarry